The waves of the water so bright he can’t see yet so bright he’s been slaughter and hot and fiery and the sun is this clear the moon comes to destroy with darkness beams when little kids hold fear all is not what is seems but,the moon won’t stay there for long when the sun come from the dead the fight rises and as a gong it could hit you in the head The sun is finally the winner 
until it becomes night and it’s darker
June 21, 2015 at 8:16 pm
Jomay, I think you need to look at how you have formatted this. The first line in a Sonnet needs to have a capital letter, and it needs to be laid out so that the reader can clearly see the fourteen lines.
You have made a clear effort to use an ABAB rhyme scheme here which is excellent.